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My first poem of love

热度 3已有 155 次阅读2013-3-23 18:24

Love is like a rose in fog

With mystery she is more adored

At first sight my heart was hot

I honored you as the present of god

 

Love is like a sound sleep

A long time has passed when I awake

Some nightmares of which I’m afraid

More tightly your hand I have tendency to take

 

Love is like a prick in throat

I have pain to get other things swallowed

It seems like a barrier unwanted

Of which I always desire to get rid

 

Love is like a gorgeous firework

In full bloom she lighted my whole world

Her clamor is going to fade

With beautiful memories eternally left


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回复 晴天 2013-3-23 20:46
好诗!可以以帖子形式发到论坛“我的文笔秀”里大家一起分享哦!
回复 穆雨潇 2013-3-24 16:24
晴天: 好诗!可以以帖子形式发到论坛“我的文笔秀”里大家一起分享哦!
谢谢,“我的文笔秀”链接在哪儿呢
回复 绿色心灵 2013-3-25 09:53
“我的文笔秀”打开品读天下的首页,就能找到这个版块了.
回复 秦秀文 2013-3-25 13:05
当年最害怕的就是英语了,能用英语写诗本就叫人佩服。这一首我貌似看懂了。爱,总是一个永恒的话题。赞
回复 晴天 2013-3-25 13:47
在这里哦 http://c-poetry.com/forum.php?mod=post&action=newthread&fid=122&extra=page%3D1&sortid=20
回复 穆雨潇 2013-3-25 18:59
秦秀文: 当年最害怕的就是英语了,能用英语写诗本就叫人佩服。这一首我貌似看懂了。爱,总是一个永恒的话题。赞
Thanks,这一首作于一次英语作业,当时还跟老师抱怨没有经历过爱情如何写爱情诗,老师说正因为没有经历,才更能自由想象:)

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